Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国朋友Jim要来北京旅游，他写信寻求你对旅游地的建议，请你给他写封回信，内容包括：

（1）景点名称；

（2）参观内容；

（3）推荐理由。

注意：

（1）词数不少于50；

（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jim,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I’m glad to hear that you are coming to Beijing, which is an extremely smart decision. As your close friend, I’m really glad to give you some advice.

I do think the Great Wall is a perfect choice. As is known to all, the Great Wall is one of the seven wonders in the world. It was first built in the ancient dynasties and rebuilt in the modern times, since it is the pride and honor of the Chinese people.

People will usually choose to visit The Badaling Great Wall in Yanqing district, in the northwest of the capital city. As it is a little far away from the city center, you may go there either by bus or take a train. Having arrived at the foot of the Great Wall, you will first of all take some photos at the large square with a symbolic monument carved with the Chinese characters for The Badaling Great Wall, very impressive. Then you may start your climbing up the Great Wall steps, which is kind of tiring and energy-consuming. However, along the way, you may enjoy the breath-taking sceneries, enormous monuments full of culture, and splendid beacon towers, which will surely fulfills your journey with unimaginable joy and excitement. Averagely, it will take you two hours to get to the top, where you will enjoy a great sense of achievement.

As is said in China, he who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man. The Great Wall is the treasure of our country, and one of the most important and representative sightseeing of Beijing. It is, of course, a must-see for you! You can’t miss it! Just come and enjoy yourself!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是美国朋友Jim要来北京旅游，他写信寻求你对旅游地的建议，请你给他写封回信，可以对北京的各个景点进行介绍。根据要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态，其中重点讲述对景点的介绍，并给出推荐理由。在写作时可以使用一些高级词汇和好的句型来增加亮点，另外因为是建议信，所以在用词上要注意是建议性的。最后一定要进行检查看是否有漏点或拼写错误。

【亮点说明】

As is said in China, he who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man.句中，as引导非限制性定语从句，指代主句，译为“正如”；定语从句who does not reach the Great Wall修饰先行词he，he是主句的主语。