Question

假如你是李红，近日，你班正在开展一场主题为“幸福是什么？”的讨论。请你根据下列信息，给校报写一封120词左右的英文信，介绍讨论的情况。

1.40%学生认为：①幸福就是住大房，生活在大城市；②身体健康，生活无压力自由自在；③工作、生活得过且过，不必吃苦

2.60%学生认为：①幸福就是拼搏取得成功；②保持自信乐观，迎接各种挑战；③爱家人爱朋友，奉献社会

3.你的看法：(至少两点)

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you about

Yours,

Li Hong

Answer 1

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the result of the discussion.

Happiness means different things to different people. For example, some students believe that if they have much money, they will be happy because they are able to buy and do what they want to. Some students think they will be happy if they are in good health, for they can do whatever they like. Others wish to have much wealth from their parents. In this way they don’t have to work hard and they can own everything. However, I don’t quite agree with the above points. I don’t think money means happiness. We can’t buy many thins such as health, happiness and knowledge with money. I value knowledge, which can make me do many things for mankind.

Although different people value happiness differently, my “wealth” of happiness is my studies.

Yours,

Li Hong

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求根据所给信息给校报写一封英文信，介绍一下针对主题“幸福是什么？”的讨论情况。写作要点包括：40%学生的观点；60%学生的观点；自己的观点这三个方面。词数在120词左右，开头和结尾不计入总词数；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性。

亮点说明：范文涵盖了所有的写作要点，进行了适当的拓展，并注意语句的连贯性；范文还使用了宾语从句、定语从句、条件状语从句等语法知识，具备较强的语言运用能力。

语法方面：宾语从句①that if they have much money...，②what they want to，③whatever they like；条件句if they have much money；原因状语从句because they are able to buy and do what they want to；定语从句which can make me do many things for mankind等，语法知识运用娴熟，显示了较强的语法功底，也使作文句式变得多样；

篇章结构方面：范文注意使用for example, and, in this way, however, such as等来衔接句子和段落，使表达变得更有条理；

短语和搭配方面：范文使用了in good health, want to do, wish to do, work hard, agree with, such as等短语和搭配，使作文的内容变得充实。

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