Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除: 把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。

修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Mary is a high school student, who devoted herself to her lessons every day. Last Saturday,as usual, she went to several class. In the evening, she continued to study until deeply into night.She was too sleepy and tired that she couldn’t work effectively. On the Sunday morning, she wasabout to do her lessons while her father came up and advised her to take a break. Soon they came up a good idea. We decided to go cycling in the countryside. Mary enjoyed herself, competing and chatting with her father, and felt relaxing in the open air. On Monday, Mary was energetic but active in class.

Answer 1

1.devoted改为devotes

2.class改为classes

3.deeply改为deep

4.too改为so

5.去掉the

6.while改为when

7.加上with

8.We改为They

9.relaxing改为relaxed

10.but改为and

【解析】

试题分析：

1. is a high school student, who devoted herself to her lessons every day.根据从句的主句为一般时，从句表述的是也不是过去的事，故用应现在时，故devoted改为devotes；

2. went to several class, several 表示几个，后接可数名词复数形式，故class改为classes

3. continued to study until deeply into night deep into night，为固定短语表示深夜，故deeply改为deep

4. was too sleepy and tired that she couldn’t work effectively.so…that…为固定句型，意为如此..以致，句意为她如此想睡和疲惫以致她不能有效工作，故too 改为so

5. the Sunday morning，星期几之前不需要用定冠词，故去掉the

6. was about to do her lessons while her father came up ，sb.is about to do ..when…为固定句型表示某人要做某事时这时…故 while改为when

7. they came up a good idea.，come up with …固定短语意为想出….故加上with

8. decided to go cycling in the countryside.前文说他们想出一个主意，此处应是他们决定去骑车，故We改为They

9. felt relaxing in the open air，relaxed才是relax的形容词放松的，故relaxing改为relaxed

10. Monday, Mary was energetic but active in class.精力充沛的与积极的两者应是并列关系，故but改为and

考点：考查短文改错