例如:It was very nice to get your invitation to spend∧weekend with you.Luckily I was the am completely free then,so I'll to say"yes".I'll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday on evening. |
分析 我是一名中学生.我自愿成为一名志愿者以帮助其他人.尽管我很忙,我仍然想作为志愿者去探访"老人之家".除了帮老人们打扫卫生之外,我能做的另外一件事是和我的朋友一起表演节目.我相信我会成为一个能和那里的老人融洽相处的人. 除此之外,我准备帮助那些住院生病的孩子们.我喜欢孩子,而且我会全身心地去照顾他们.总之,我乐意帮助那些需要帮助的人.请通过电话或者邮件与我联系.
解答 Dear Sir,
I'm a middle school student.I am willing∧be a volunteer to help others.Although I am busy,
to
I still wanted to visit Old People's Home as a volunteer.Apart fromdosome cleaning for the old
want doing
people,giving some performance with my friendsareanother thing I can do.I believe I'll be the
performances is
person who can get on goodwith the old there.
well
Besides,I am ready to give a hand to sick children in hospital.I love childrenbutI'll devote
and/so
myself to taking good care of him.In a word,I would like to help those people whomneed help.
them who/that
Please get in touch with me by phone or by the mail.
Warm-hearted
Jim
1.在willing后加to.be willing to do something 为固定结构,意为"乐意做某事".
2.把wanted改成want.文章的内容为一封信,全篇使用的是现在时,所以不能用一般过去时.
3.把do 改为doing.apart from 是固定搭配,意为"除…之外",from是介词,需要用动词的-ing形式.
4.把performance 改为performances.performance是可数名词,意为"表演",由前面的some可知此处应该用可数名词的复数形式.
5.把are改为is.giving some performances with my friends是动名词短语,在句中做主语时谓语用单数形式.
6.把good 改成well.get on well with意为"与…相处融洽",修饰动词短语get on with 需要用副词.
7.把but改为and/so."爱孩子,并且要全身心地照顾他们",整个句子在逻辑上是并列关系或因果关系,而非转折关系.
8.把him改为them.这的代词使用来代替"children",所以用them.
9.把whom改为who/that.定语从句缺少主语,且先行词是人,故用who/that.
10.去掉the.by+名词,表示"通过使用…",中间不加the.
点评 本题的重点有固定短语、时态、主谓一致、连词、名词单复数、定语从句、代词等,需掌握扎实的语言知识并结合语境才能找出问题,解决问题.
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