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8.第一节:短文改错(共10小题; 每小题1分,满分10分)
下面短文中有10处语言错误.请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.       
修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分.
 
例如:It was very nice to get your invitation to spend∧weekend with you.Luckily I was
                                            the                         am
completely free then,so I'll to say"yes".I'll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday                                                             on
evening.
Dear Sir,
    I'm a middle school student.I am willing be a volunteer to help others.Although I am busy,I still wanted to visit Old People's Home as a volunteer.Apart from do some cleaning for the old people,giving some performance with my friends are another thing I can do.I believe I'll be the person who can get on good with the old there.Besides,I am ready to give a hand to sick children in hospital.I love children but I'll devote myself to taking good care of him.In a word,I would like to help those people whom need help.
  Please get in touch with me by phone or by the mail.
                                                                             Warm-hearted
                                                                                    Jim.

分析 我是一名中学生.我自愿成为一名志愿者以帮助其他人.尽管我很忙,我仍然想作为志愿者去探访"老人之家".除了帮老人们打扫卫生之外,我能做的另外一件事是和我的朋友一起表演节目.我相信我会成为一个能和那里的老人融洽相处的人. 除此之外,我准备帮助那些住院生病的孩子们.我喜欢孩子,而且我会全身心地去照顾他们.总之,我乐意帮助那些需要帮助的人.请通过电话或者邮件与我联系.

解答 Dear Sir,
    I'm a middle school student.I am willing∧be a volunteer to help others.Although I am busy,
                                                                  to
I still wanted to visit Old People's Home as a volunteer.Apart fromdosome cleaning for the old
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people,giving some performance with my friendsareanother thing I can do.I believe I'll be the
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person who can get on goodwith the old there.
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    Besides,I am ready to give a hand to sick children in hospital.I love childrenbutI'll devote 
                                                                                                                      and/so
myself to taking good care of him.In a word,I would like to help those people whomneed help.
                                          them                                                                   who/that
    Please get in touch with me by phone or by the mail.
 Warm-hearted
 Jim
1.在willing后加to.be willing to do something 为固定结构,意为"乐意做某事".
2.把wanted改成want.文章的内容为一封信,全篇使用的是现在时,所以不能用一般过去时.
3.把do 改为doing.apart from 是固定搭配,意为"除…之外",from是介词,需要用动词的-ing形式.
4.把performance 改为performances.performance是可数名词,意为"表演",由前面的some可知此处应该用可数名词的复数形式.
5.把are改为is.giving some performances with my friends是动名词短语,在句中做主语时谓语用单数形式.
6.把good 改成well.get on well with意为"与…相处融洽",修饰动词短语get on with 需要用副词.
7.把but改为and/so."爱孩子,并且要全身心地照顾他们",整个句子在逻辑上是并列关系或因果关系,而非转折关系.
8.把him改为them.这的代词使用来代替"children",所以用them.
9.把whom改为who/that.定语从句缺少主语,且先行词是人,故用who/that.
10.去掉the.by+名词,表示"通过使用…",中间不加the.

点评 本题的重点有固定短语、时态、主谓一致、连词、名词单复数、定语从句、代词等,需掌握扎实的语言知识并结合语境才能找出问题,解决问题.

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