Question

网购已成为很多高中生青睐的一种现代购物方式。请你以”Online Shopping” 为题，并从以下三个方面，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己对网购的一些看法。
*越来越多的高中生喜欢在网上购买商品；
*网上购物可能存在的问题；
*你的建议。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：网店店主Internet shopping provider 假货fake goods
Online Shopping
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Answer 1

Online Shopping
Nowadays, shopping through the Internet has been becoming increasingly popular among senior school students and they prefer to buy almost everything they want online.
Online shopping, however, can sometimes bring headaches to students when they enjoy shopping online. Firstly, the quality of the objects may not be as good as they are described and it is possible for them to buy fake goods. In addition, some students find it very hard to make a change when they are not satisfied with the commodities bought online.
I strongly hold the view that regulations and rules should be worked out to screen and check Internet shopping providers. If so, I believe a promising online shopping is just awaiting us.

试题分析：考查半开放性作文。本文是关于时下流行的网购；文章只给出部分要点，需要考生做适当的发挥。可以从叙述网购流行的现象角度出发。在审题的时候要注意时态同时注意要点要完全，不能有遗漏。写作时使用合适的连接词，让文章更流畅。
点评：本文属于半开放性作文，给考生的发挥余地较大。写此类作文，可以采用3步走的写作模板。
第一步：描绘现象如：Nowadays, shopping through the Internet has been becoming increasingly popular among senior school students and they prefer to buy almost everything they want online.
第二步：进一步分析，可指出优点或缺点如：Online shopping, however, can sometimes bring headaches to students when they enjoy shopping online. Firstly, the quality of the objects may not be as good as they are described and it is possible for them to buy fake goods. In addition, some students find it very hard to make a change when they are not satisfied with the commodities bought online.
第三步：总结观点，如：I strongly hold the view that regulations and rules should be worked out to screen and check Internet shopping providers. If so, I believe a promising online shopping is just awaiting us.
平时多注意句型的归纳和整理，注意作文有用词汇的积累，让作文行云流水，衔接自然。