Question

【题目】假设你是某中学的学生李华，你校拟选拔一批优秀学生，利用暑假到某小学为学生辅导英语，你希望参加此活动。根据以下提示，用英语给校评选小组写一封申请信，要求如下：

1. 此活动对自己，对辅导学生的好处。

2. 个人优点，如性格、语言能力。

3. 你的辅导计划。

4 . 字数：不少于100。

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two .____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two. I am applying for the position as an English teacher in this summer holiday.

People can get many benefits from this activity. Firstly, the pupils can improve their level of English due to our help. Secondly, we can learn how to get on well with the pupils as a teacher while we can improve our skills of using English. What’s more, the burden of the society can be reduced.

My ability to write and speak English is out of question. I am good at communication and organizing and I like to help others.

My plan is that the students should talk with me at least five minutes every day in English and write three papers one week. I am sure that I am qualified for the position.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是书信类作文，要求用英语给学校写一封申请信，申请用暑期到某小学为学生辅导英语。文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，但不是很具体，考生要把要点全交代，不能有遗漏。而且要拓展内容，在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：Firstly，secondly， Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。

【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，应用了一些较好的词组和句子：applying for 申请；benefits from 从---获得利益；get on well with 与---相处得好；we can learn how to get on well with the pupils as a teacher while we can improve our skills of using English.此句中while引导时间状语从句；the burden of the society can be reduced.句中使用了含情态动词的被动语态；out of question毫无疑问；My plan is that the students should talk with me at least five minutes every day句中使用that引导的表语从句；另外，Firstly, Secondly, What’s more,等的运用为文章增色添彩。