Question

【题目】书面表达

假定你是高二年级的李明,从网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在英语兴办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加.请写一封电子邮件申请参加.内容主要包括:

1.自我介绍(包括英语能力);

2.参加意图(介绍中国,了解其他国家);

3.希望获准.

注意:1.词数100左右;

2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3. 邮件开头已给出,不计入总词数.

夏令营 the Summer Camp

Dear Sir or Madam,

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m Li Ming, a Senior II student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and I’d like to take part in it. I’ve been learning English for 10 years, making me have no difficultly in communicating with others in English. What is more, I’ll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.

Look forward to your reply!

Regards,

Li Ming

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇半开放性作文，原文所给观点需要做适当补充，可以用自己的实际情况进行说明，如参加意图方面可以从拓宽视野，增强兴趣，提高英语和自己的能力等方面展开。我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

【亮点说明】文章使用了很好的短语和句子：am interested in对...感兴趣，take part in参加，have no difficultly in doing干...没有困难，the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet是一句定语从句，I know that you welcome students一句宾语从句，运用了What is more等过渡性短语使文章更有条理性。