Question

【题目】假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你校将与英语友好校举办一场在线会议，探讨如何利用网络学习英语，请你根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。

(1) 介绍你是如何利用网络学英语的(至少2点)；

(2) 简单谈谈你对利用网络学习英语的看法；

(3) 请友好校的学生分享他们的经验。

注意：80-100词；已给出的开头和结尾不计入总词数。

词汇：网上学习：online study

Good morning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. I’d like to take this opportunity to talk about how I learn English on the Internet.

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Thank you.

Answer 1

【答案】As we all know, the Internet is a useful tool which can help us a lot in our study. As for me, I often use the Internet to collect some materials about English, such as some famous English novels. At the same time, I also made a lot of foreign friends through the Internet. We often communicate on the Internet in English, so I have my spoken English improved.

But online learning is also a double-edged sword. On one hand, it does bring us a lot of convenience. But if we indulge in it for a long time, it will also easily distract us from our study. So we should learn how to arrange our time reasonably.

Finally, I would like to invite students who are from our friendly schools to share their experience of learning Englisg through the Internet.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求以学生李津的身份写写一篇发言稿，探讨如何利用网络学习英语。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文。

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。

结构：总分法。

要求：

(1)介绍你是如何利用网络学英语的(至少2点)；

(2)简单谈谈你对利用网络学习英语的看法；

(3)请友好校的学生分享他们的经验。

第二步：列提纲（重点短语）

a useful tool ；made a lot of foreign friends；a double-edged sword；arrange our time reasonably

第三步：连词成句

1. As we all know, the Internet is a useful tool which can help us a lot in our study.

2. I also made a lot of foreign friends through the Internet.

3. But online learning is also a double-edged sword.

4. So we should learn how to arrange our time reasonably.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇

1.表示文章结构顺序：提出如何利用网络学习；网络学习英语的看法；友好学校学生分享经验。

2. 表示并列补充关系：As we all know；At the same time；On one hand；But；So；Finally

第五步：润色修改