Question

【题目】 短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每次错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Sunny 31st, July

It was sunny today and I was in a good mood. Tired of studying or the noise of city life, I come to the ecology park to enjoy scenery and get relaxing in the afternoon.

While I arrived at the park, what came into its sight were the thick green trees. The air was fresh. In addition, I could clearly see a path around the pond. Lying on the grasses decorated with various flowers, I felt with ease because all that I wanted was peace inside.

Therefore, with time going by quickly, the sun was setting in the west. So I had to return back home. I would never forget such romantic experience, which was really beyond description.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】or→and

【2】come→came

【3】relaxing→relaxed

【4】While→When

【5】its→my

【6】grasses→grass

【7】with→at

【8】Therefore→However

【9】去掉back

【10】在such后面加a

【解析】

试题分析：

【1】or→and 考查连词。句意：厌烦了学习和城市生活的喧嚣。此处为顺接意义的并列关系，故把or改为and。

【2】come→came 考查时态。该句谓语应用过去时态，故把come改为came。

【3】relaxing→relaxed 考查非谓语动词。get relaxed得到放松，relaxing通常描述对象是物。故把relaxing改为relaxed。

【4】While→When 当我到达公园的时候。while引导从句时，谓语动词必须是持续性的。故把While改为When。

【5】its→my 考查代词。此处指我看到的景象，代词应用my。

【6】grasses→grass 考查名词单复数。grass为不可数名词，故把grasses改为grass。

【7】with→at 考查介词搭配。at ease是固定搭配，意为“轻松地”。故把with改为at。

【8】Therefore→However 考查连词。此处表示转折，不是英国，故把Therefore改为however。

【9】去掉back 考查动词。return返回，后面不再接back，语意重复了。

【10】在such后面加a 考查冠词。experience作“经历”讲时为可数名词，such后加a。

【知识拓展】

1.表示情感的现在分词和过去分词

surprising令人惊讶的，surprised感到惊讶；frightening令人害怕的， frightened感到害怕； moving令人感动的， moved 感动；exciting 令人兴奋的，excited 感到兴奋；boring令人厌烦的， bored感到厌烦；annoying令人烦恼的---annoyed感到烦恼的；relaxing放松的---relaxed感到放松的。现在分词的主语通常指事物；过去分词的主语通常指人。

2.return 和back；repeat和again；enter和into不能在同一句中出现。