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【题目】假如你是李华，目前你们小区里有很多人养宠物，有的人养小猫小狗小鸟之类的小动物i，但也有的人养凶猛(violent)藏獒（Tibetan Mastiff)等危险的动物，因此小区不再安静与安全。

请你写信给某英文报社，反映此问题，信的内容还应包括以下要点：

1.宠物过多，噪音影响人们的正常休息；

2.宠物的排泄物（waste）不及时处理，污染环境；

3.有路人曾被藏獒惊吓（frightened)或咬伤过（bitten）；

4.你对人们养宠物的观点是.....

Dear editor,

Nowadays many people in our community are fond of keeping pets.But there are many problems caused by the situation.I would like to tell you my thoughts about it.

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Yours faithfully

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear editor,

Nowadays many people in our communityare fond of keeping pets. But there are many problems caused by the situation.I would like to tell you my thoughts about it.

A large number of people in ourcommunity keep small dogs, cats, and birds as pets, and still others prefer tokeep violent animals like Tibetan Mastiffs. As a result, our community is nolonger quiet and safe. Noise like the dog bark at midnight often drives uscrazy. The waste left by various pets in public places can always make you notfeel like eating anything for a few days. Some young children are oftenfrightened or have even been bitten by the violent Tibetan Mastiffs.

I think keeping small and cuteanimals is good for our health, but I hate it when the pet-owners do not careabout whether their pets are polluting the environment or affecting others’lives.

Yours faithfully

Li Hua

【解析】本题考查提纲类作文。首先要认真审题，假如你是李华，目前你们小区里有很多人养宠物，有的人养小猫小狗小鸟之类的小动物，但也有的人养凶猛(violent)藏獒（Tibetan Mastiff)等危险的动物，因此小区不再安静与安全。请你写信给某英文报社，反映此问题。其次要确定时态，表示一个客观事实，用一般现在时。然后要确定文章的结构，信的内容已经给出，逐条翻译即可。在写作过程中，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合题目所给出的信息，不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。正确使用写信的格式。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些高级句型。例如I think keeping small and cuteanimals is good for our health, but I hate it when the pet-owners do not careabout whether their pets are polluting the environment or affecting others’lives.这里含有两个宾语从句。