Question

请以“我们为什么上大学”为题，写一篇议论文。（字数100－120）
提示：1.不同的人对此有不同的看法。
2.有些学生以为大学是最理想的地方，上大学就是为了获取好的工作和高额工资，但结果是大学的生活和毕业后的工作往往使他们失望。
3.事实上，大学给那些渴望学到更多的知识以便将来报效祖国的人提供了良好的学习机会和必要的条件，这才是大学真正的吸引所在。

Answer 1

                 Why Do We Go To Universities?
Why do we go to universities? Different people have different views.
Some students may have many colorful dreams and regard universities as the most ideal places. They think that good jobs and higher pays will certainly result from a college education. In fact, the university life often makes them feel disappointed, and after graduation many of them will find the jobs aren’t the ones they like and the pays are not higher than they expect.
I think that a university provides good chances for those who are eager to learn more knowledge so that they can serve their motherland better in the future. This is why universities have a strong attraction.

试题分析：本文是一篇议论文。话题是：为什么不上大学？文章的要点基本上都给了出来，考生基本上只需要翻译即可，写作的时候注意使用高级词汇如result from..; be thirsty to do sth等提高文章的层次。同上也要变化使用高级句式，让文章不那么的平淡。
点评：本文仍然属于提纲类短文写作，要点给的仍然很全，考生仍然要把所有的要点都包括在内，不能有遗漏，在议论文中要注意观点的一分为二，运用谚语如：Every coin has two sides.等可以大大提高文章的得分。