Question

【题目】作为一名中学生，你在成长的过程中会学到很多东西，如：如何有爱心、承担责任、学会感恩、

Answer 1

【答案】

A good friend can be our reliable companion while with a bad one we may easily get lost. I’ve learned this from my own experience.

Once before a test, my friend Joy and I came into the classroom, where several classmates gathered aroud, writing something excitedly. I was shocked when one of them told us secretly, “My friend in another class finished the test yesterday. I’ll share you the right answers!” I tried to find any signs of shame on her face but failed. I refused her “generous” offer when Joy patted me on the shoulder, whispering, “We needn’t follow them.”

To my understanding, friends, like books, if well chosen, will greatly benefit us. Never should we keep bad company.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇谈看法的写作。在成长的过程中会学到很多东西，如：如何有爱心、承担责任、学会感恩、择友等等。选择一个话题，描述一段经历，并说说你的想法并发表自己的看法。注意详细描述经历，结构清晰。时态：用一般现在时。

【亮点说明】reliable companion ,come into, keep bad company，To my understanding.等词组使文章更生动；A good friend can be our reliable companion while with a bad one we may easily get lost. While 连词表示转折；Once before a test, my friend Joy and I came into the classroom, where several classmates gathered aroud, writing something excitedly. Where引导的定语从句使文章更有水平。To my understanding, friends, like books,

if well chosen, will greatly benefit us. 将朋友比喻成书籍，十分生动形象。文章的安排分为三部分，开头部分：引出话题。正文部分：描述事例。结尾部分：简要总结，发表自己的观点。