Question

【题目】假定你是李华，想在毕业实习期间去一家出版社做兼职英语编辑。请你用英文给该出版社的英语主编写封信。要点如下：

1.写信目的；

2.自我简介；

3.表达愿望。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Chief Editor，

I learned that your press is looking for a part-time English editor.____________________________________

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Thanks for reading my letter and I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Chief Editor，

I learned that your press is looking for a part-time English editor.I’m writing to apply for this position.

I have a good command of both written and spoken English.Besides,I have good computer skill,which certainly play an important role in editing.What's more,I'm good at getting on with others and fond of learning new things. More importantly,I have great patience and a strong sense of responsibility.As we all know,editing is hard work that requires a high level of concentration.Therefore,I believe I am the right person for this job.

I'd appreciate it if you could give me the chance.And I'll try my best to do d good job.

Thanks for reading my letter and I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是一篇学生们熟悉的书信体裁的书面表达，内容贴近学生生活，所以人人有话可说。在写作时要注意先列出要点，而且要注意将来时态、现在时态以及现在完成时态的交错使用；注意使用高级句式和多种结构的使用，而且语气要委婉礼貌。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇较为优秀的范文。格式正确，要点齐全，语言通顺流畅，很好地完成了写作任务。I have good computer skill,which certainly play an important role in editing.ｗｈｉｃｈ引导非限制性定语从句；As we all know,editing is hard work that requires a high level of concentration.ａｓ引导的非限制性定语从句非常巧妙；I believe I am the right person for this job.省略ｔｈａｔ的宾语从句；I'd appreciate it if―――，固定句式经典运用；另外，What's more, More importantly, Therefore,等的运用为文章增色添彩。