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【题目】假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When the accident was happened, I was standing near a bus stop. There I saw an old lady waiting a bus with her umbrella. The bus soon arrived. There were too many passengers hurried to get on it that the old lady couldn’t get on. A driver closed the door without looking careful and drove away. Unluckily, the old lady’s umbrella was caught by the door. He shouted to the driver but he didn’t hear. The bus pulled her along the road. Finally, she fall to the ground. Several minutes late, the ambulance came and took her to hospital. I thought it was the driver should be responsible for the accident.

Answer 1

【答案】1. 去掉happened前面的was。

2. 在waiting后加for。

3. too改为so

4. hurried改为hurrying

5. A改为The

6. careful改为carefully

7. He改为She

8. fall改为fell

9. late改为later

10. 在driver后加that或who

【解析】事故发生，不能用被动，happen 无被动。

等车应该为wait for a bus

There were too many passengers hurried to get on it that the old lady couldn’t get on.此句考查so…that句型，所以，too 不对。

There were too many passengers hurried to get on it此句中passengers 与hurry to get on it之间为主动关系，所以用doing。

A driver closed the door without looking careful and drove away.此句中的driver特指这辆车的司机，所以不能用a。

A driver closed the door without looking careful and drove away.此句中司机没有仔细看，修饰look应该用副词carefully。

He shouted to the driver but he didn’t hear.此句表示哪位老妇人对司机喊叫，所以人称错了。

Finally, she fall to the ground.此句时态错误。根据前后文此句应该用过去式。

几分钟之后，应该用Several minutes later,而不用late，late表示晚的，迟到的。

I thought it was the driver should be responsible for the accident.此句为强调句型，所以要加上that/who.