Question

 最近的一项调查表明如今的中国青年的人生目标比过去要显得多元化。这种选择的变化表明社会在进步，人们的生活目标较以前更为实际。

比例	目标	手段
53.5%	挣钱给自己买一房一车	71.9%的人说将努力拼搏以实现人生的目标
44%	提高生活质量
43.7%	成为富人
23.9%	找一份好工作

【参考词汇】   多元化（的）：diversified     调查对象：respondent

【写作要求】

1. 以上述信息为材料写一段短文。可以根据实际适当发挥；

2. 中心突出，语意连贯，层次清晰．书写规范；

3. 不少于100字，

4. 标题不计入字数。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version：

Chinese Young People's Life Goals Today

A recent survey shows that in today's society, Chinese young people's life goals have become more diversified than before. When young people are asked what they will struggle for, more than half of the respondents choose to earn enough money to buy a house and a car for themselves. In addition to this practical goal, some people, about 44%, pick up their life goal as improving their life quality or to be a rich person while 23.9% of the respondents are simply satisfied to have a good job. As for how to achieve their life goals, most of them prefer struggling to realize their dreams. The survey shows that the society is making progress and people's life goals have become more practical.

【解析】

试题分析：本文要求根据图表内容写一篇作文。在写作前同学们要仔细分析图表，根据图表所示，文章要写明人们四种不同的目标以及所占的比例和实现目标的途径手段。在写调查报告时一般首先写明调查的结果，然后再详细介绍各种不同的情况，最后写明这种现象所反映的问题，即：这种选择的变化表明社会在进步，人们的生活目标较以前更为实际。此外，反应社会现象的调查报告一般使用现在时态，而且要客观真实地反映图表所给信息。最后，还要注意语言的流畅通顺，要适当发挥想象，补充文章细节以使文章内容丰满。

【亮点说明】文章总共分为三个层次，首先开门见山提出调查结果Chinese young people's life goals have become more diversified than before，然后介绍了四种不同情况以及各自所占的比例，最后总结这种变化的实质，这使得文章结构紧凑，层次分明。尽管文章短小，但是表达方式却是一大亮点，比如涵盖信息量较大的复合句When young people are asked what they will struggle for, more than half of the respondents choose to earn enough money to buy a house and a car for themselves.和In addition to this practical goal, some people, about 44%, pick up their life goal as improving their life quality or to be a rich person while 23.9% of the respondents are simply satisfied to have a good job.这充分显示了作者语言的把控力。此外In addition to 、As for等短语也有效地连接了上下文，使文章语义连贯，自然流畅。

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