[题目]假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词.刪除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.修改:在错的词下画一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词,2 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

刪除：把多余的词用斜线（\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起)不计分。

Today as I was leaving the church for home, I hear an old man saying he was cold. I was dressing in an expensive scarf. I had been a precious gift to me, so I gave it to him. In my opinion, the happiness what I receive as I see someone else happy in their hearts means many than the scarf itself.

He offered to accompanying me home and we talked all of the way to my house. For me, a material thing doesn't have a meaning until I give them to someone. Make it good one, a truly meaning of love for others.

【答案】

【解析】第一处：考查时态。通读全文，发现采用了一般过去时，故要将hear改为heard。

第二处：考查非谓语动词。be dressed in表示“穿着”，故要把dressing变为dressed。

第三处：考查逻辑连词。尽管礼物对我来说很珍贵，但是我给了那个老人。前后有转折的意思，故要将so改为but。

第四处：考查定语从句。先行词happiness在定语从句中作receive的宾语，还可以省略，故要将what改为that/which或去掉。

第五处：考查比较级。句意：看着别人快乐比围巾本身对我来说更有意义。故要将many改为more。

第六处：考查动词不定式。offer to do something“提供做某事”，故要将accompanying改为accompany。

第七处：考查介词。一路上聊着到了我家，短语“all the way”，介词of是多余的，故要把of去掉。

第八处：考查代词一致。这里的代词指代的是围巾，我把围巾借给别人。应该用单数代词，故要将them改为it。

第九处：考查冠词。句意：使它成为一个更好的物品。故要在good前加上冠词a。

第十处：考查形容词。用形容词修饰名词meaning“意义”，故要将truly改为true。

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