Question

20．假设你是某中学学生李华，请根据右边四幅图，用英文写篇短文，记叙你参加学校演讲比赛的过程，并简要发表你的感想．

注意：
1．考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；
2．词数120左右；
3．文中不能出现考生的具体信息．
参考词汇：演讲厅lecture hall
演讲稿speech draft．
On Monday，I saw a poster which read that a speech contest with thetopic"honesty"would be held at the lecture hall the next Saturday morning．【高分句型】（Picture 1 看到有关演讲比赛的通知）
With my parents'encouragement，I entered for the contest．At first I felt at a loss about my speech draft．After referring to some magazines，I got down to my draft．（Picture 2 着手演讲比赛的草稿）Having tailored it for several times，I practiced my speechat home every day．【高分句型】My parents were more than pleased to see me so devoted．（Picture 3 调整修改草稿并在家练习）Then came the big day for my speech．【高分句型】A little bit nervous as Iwas，I managed to deliver my speech fluently．【高分句型】（Picture 4 成功自信地登台演讲）
I've learned a lot from thecontest．Confidence comes hand in hand with adequate preparations．Wellprepared，I can do everything successfully．【高分句型】（感谢）．

Answer 1

分析 本文是图画类作文，要求根据四幅图的先后顺序描述参加学校演讲比赛的过程并发表感想．在写作时，人称以第一和第三人称为主．时态以一般过去时为主．根据情景的发展，抓住细节按顺序安排好材料．重要短语：hold a speech contest （举行演讲比赛），enter for （报名参加），feel/be at a loss （茫然不知所措），refer to（参阅，查阅），get down to （着手开始做某事），tailor sth（调整，修改某物），more than pleased todo sth（做某事非常高兴），manage to do sth（设法成功地做某事），deliver one's speech（发表演讲）； learn sth from…（从…中学会…）；hand in hand（密切关联地；同时并进地）．
【高分句型】
1．I saw a poster which read that a speech contest with the topic"honesty"would be held at the lecture hall the next Saturday morning．
这里是which引导的定语从句，which在定语从句中作主语，先行词是a poster，定语从句中的谓语动词为read，read之后是宾语从句．宾语从句中a speech contest with the topic"honesty"，谓语动词为would be held，at the lecture hall the next Saturday morning为地点状语．
2．Having tailored it for several times，I practiced my speech at home every day．
这里是现在分词的完成式+宾语作状语，主句为I practiced my speech at home every day，主句的主语I与所给动词tailor存在逻辑上的主动关系，且动作存在先后关系，调整草稿动作在练习动作之前．
3．Then came the big day for my speech．
这里是全部倒装，其结构为"时间副词+谓语动词+主语"．
4．A little bit nervous as I was，I managed to deliver my speech fluently．
这里是部分倒装，其结构为"形容词+as/though+主语"．

解答 On Monday，I saw a poster which read that a speech contest with thetopic"honesty"would be held at the lecture hall the next Saturday morning．【高分句型】（Picture 1 看到有关演讲比赛的通知）
With my parents'encouragement，I entered for the contest．At first I felt at a loss about my speech draft．After referring to some magazines，I got down to my draft．（Picture 2 着手演讲比赛的草稿）Having tailored it for several times，I practiced my speechat home every day．【高分句型】My parents were more than pleased to see me so devoted．（Picture 3 调整修改草稿并在家练习）Then came the big day for my speech．【高分句型】A little bit nervous as Iwas，I managed to deliver my speech fluently．【高分句型】（Picture 4 成功自信地登台演讲）
I've learned a lot from thecontest．Confidence comes hand in hand with adequate preparations．Wellprepared，I can do everything successfully．【高分句型】（感谢）

点评 写作看图作文时，首先认真看图，结合图片和文字，确定所要表达的主题是什么，然后围绕主题，提炼要点，合理想象，对译出的要点通过合理的组合，加上必要的连接词使表达连贯．同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．