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第二节. 书面表达（满分25 分）
假如你叫李华，你班的同学就中学生是否应该带手机上学持不同意见。请你根据下列信息，给Teens的编辑写一封信，介绍同学们的看法，并阐明自己的观点。

60%的同学赞成	40%的同学反对
1.方便和家长、同学联系 2.有拍照、听音乐等多功能 可以放松自己 3.时尚	1.上网聊天，沉迷游戏，经常发短信 2.影响学生集中精力学习 3.有时影响课堂教学 4.增加家长经济负担

注意 : 1. 信的格式与开头已为你写好;            2. 词数:120 左右
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had on whether the school students should carry a mobile phone to school.  Opinions on the question are divided as follows.
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Yours sincerely
Li Ming

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One possible version:
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had on whether mobile phones should be brought to school. Opinions on the question are divided as follows.
Sixty percent of the students subscribe to the view that students can bring a mobile phone to school because it has many advantages. If a student has a mobile phone, he she can contact his parents and friends easily. (It is convenient for a student who carries a mobile phone to get in touch with his/her parents and friends.) He can also take pictures and enjoy music to relax himself. Besides, it’s fashionable to have a mobile phone.
While 40 percent of the students are opposed to the view, because with mobile phones some students may have a chat on the Internet and be addicted to playing games. What is worse, some even get into the habit of sending text messages to their friends. Thus, students may not focus their attention on (concentrate on /pay much attention to) their lessons. If by chance the phone is not turned off, the ringing will disturb the class. Furthermore, using mobile phones will add to their parents’ economic burdens.
Actually, students should place their study before other things and there is no need for us to use mobile phones. Personally, I don’t think it’s a good idea to bring mobile phones to school,

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