Question

6．目前，学校存在少数学生考试作弊现象．请你以"My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations"为题，发表个人看法．
注意：
1．短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥．
2．短文标题与开头已为你写好，不计入总词数．
3．词数：100左右．
4．参考词汇：cheat作弊；please取悦于…；break the rules破坏规矩
My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations
It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school．
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Answer 1

分析 这是一篇命题作文，就作弊现象发表看法．写作时，首先要写全要点，包括：列出现象，说明原因，分析弊端，表达看法；其次要以第一人称来写作；最后要注意时态，文章讲述的是客观现实，要用一般现在时态．
重点句型和短语：
take examinations 参加考试
please their parents and teachers 取悦老师和父母
get well prepared for 为…作充分准备
As students，we often take examinations at school，but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us．
句中which引导定语从句修饰examinations．
So when taking examinations，they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers．
句中when引导时间状语从句，从句中省略了相同的主语和系动词，是一个省略句．
In my opinion，it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools．
句中it作形式主语，真正的主语是后面的动词不定式；because引导原因状语从句．

解答 My Opinion on Cheating in Examinations
     It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school．（列举现象）
     As students，we often take examinations at school，but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us．（高分句型一）On the other hand，some of us are lazy and don't work hard at their lessons．So when taking examinations，they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachers．（高分句型二）（分析原因）
     In my opinion，it is wrong to cheat in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools．（高分句型三）We students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations．What's more，we should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinations．（表达看法）

点评 书面表达题考查的是英语的应用能力．写作时要注意：要点的提炼要全；关键短语和句型要写对；过渡词和过渡短语要自然，通顺地道；最后还要注意人称和时态使用要正确．