Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike想了解一下你参加2011年全国中学生英语冬令营的有关信息，请你根据下面的海报给他写一封信，谈谈有关情况和活动意义，并邀请他参加你们的活动。

注意：1. 信必须包括以上内容要点，可以适当增加细节，使内容连贯；

2. 词数： 100字左右

3. 参考词汇：全国中学生英语能力竞赛 NEPC

Dear Mike,

Nice to hear from you again._____________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mike,

Nice to hear from you again. As you know, this winter vacation, at the end of February, 2013, we winners of NEPC will go to a five-day English Winter Camp in Beijing. Some English teachers from China, the USA, England and Australia will join us.

In the camp, we will have some English speaking competitions, watch some wonderful performances given by the students and visit some places of interest in Beijing. Besides, we will exchange our English learning experience and talk about our colorful school life in English. I think this winter camp will greatly improve my spoken English and I will make some new friends there.

I do hope you will come and join us.

Best wishes,

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲类作文。提纲作文在写作时需要注意以下几个方面：首先需要审题。即：审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。其次，考生要能够抓中心，列要点，列出写作提纲。 写作文时，一定要切题，抓住中心，紧扣要点。然后在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下，考生应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来。最后根据要点选词组句，然后按照篇章结构连句成篇。本篇文章的要点具体，可分成三段写，第一段写地点、时间、人员；第二段写活动内容；第三段写希望得到对方的回信。

【亮点说明】本文要点齐全、结构完整。文中使用了大量的短语，如colorful life in English、improve my spoken English等；还使用了多种表达方式，如非谓语动词：watch some wonderful performances given by the students；再如定语从句：As you know, this winter…，还有宾语从句：I think this winter camp will greatly improve…。