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【题目】假如你叫李华，你和笔友Jane互寄了全家的合影。Jane看了合影后来信问为什么你没有兄弟姐妹。请用英语写封100字左右的回信说明情况。内容包括以下几点：

原因	1．中国人口增长过快； 2．二十世纪八十年代开始实行计划生育； 3．大部分中国家庭是独生子女。
看法	1．能受到好的教育；父母关爱更多； 2．孤独、自私，生活能力差；建议多交朋友。

注意：1．可适当增加细节使行文连贯；

2．字数100左右；

3．开头已给出，不计人总字数；

4．参考词汇；计划生育family program独生子女the only child

Dear Jane,

Thank you for your letter and the photo of your family.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jane,

Thank you for your letter and the photo of your family. Now I am writing to tell you why I am the only child in my family.

As you know, the population of China is growing very fast. In order to control the rapid increase of population, in the 1980s the government of China began to put into practice the family programme---- one child for each couple. As a result, most families have only one child. The child in the family can get more love from the family and chances to get better education. On the other hand, the only child is selfish, and not so independent. Sometimes they feel lonely. I think, every the only child like me should learn to make more friends.

Hope that we write more often.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：

根据题干内容，你和笔友Jane之前互寄了全家的合影，Jane看了合影后来信问你为什么没有兄弟姐妹。本文是写给Jane的信件，说明中国的独生子女的情况并表达看法。成文时应注意以下几点：(1) 内容完整。(2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：过去式为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。根据题目的要求和我们上面提到的注意点，列出提纲：第一部分：直接引入话题；第二部分：说明原因，表达看法（中国的独生子女的政策，以及自己对独生子女的看法）；第三部分：表达希望（希望很快回信）。

【亮点说明】

1.使用高级句型：宾语从句的使用Now I am writing to tell you why I am the only child in my family.；as引导的定语从句As you know, the population of China is growing very fast.。2.使用了过渡词语：as a result，On the other hand等。3.使用了重要短语：in order to 为了；put into practice实施；as a result结果；make friends交朋友。