Question

短文改:
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共
有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
      1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
      2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

       My husband, Mike and I were at a restaurant with his boss. When Mike began a story I was
sure he had told it before, I gave him a kick under the table. There was no response, so I gave him
other one. Still the story went on. All of sudden he stopped, smiled and saying, “Oh, but I’ve
told you this one before, haven’t I?” We all laughed and changed the topic. Later, above the dance
floor, I asked my husband why it has taken him so long to get my messages. “What do you mean?”
he replied. “I stopped the story as soon as you kicked me.” “However I kicked you twice, and it
still took you a while to stop!” Suddenly we realized what had been happened. When we returned to
my table, the boss smiled and said to me, “After the second one, I guessed it was not for me, so I
passed it along and kicked Mike.”
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Answer 1

    My husband, Mike and I were at a restaurant with his boss. When Mike began a story I was

sure he had told it before, I gave him a kick under the table. There was no response, so I gave him
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other one. Still the story went on. All of ∧sudden he stopped, smiled and saying, “Oh, but I’ve
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told you this one before, haven’t I?” We all laughed and changed the topic. Later, above the dance
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floor, I asked my husband why it has taken him so long to get my messages. “What do you mean?”
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he replied. “I stopped the story as soon as you kicked me.” “However I kicked you twice, and it 
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still took you a while to stop!” Suddenly we realized what had been happened. When we returned to 
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my table, the boss smiled and said to me, “After the second one, I guessed it was not for me, so I
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passed it along and kicked Mike.”