Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I was pleased to hear from you and I am written to tell you something about the changes in my school.

You are right. Great changes have taken place in my school. It is not longer what it used to be three years ago, when there were only one teaching building and a playground. I am happy to tell you two new buildings had built and are in use. One of them is a new classroom building, in it there are rooms for music, arts and computer teaching. The other is a library, where we can read different kind of books, newspapers and magazines. Besides, my school is good equipped with sports facilities and musical instruments. A number of students has also grown from 1,500 to 2,500. What’s more, we had planted a lot of trees and flowers in and around the school.

I believe my school will become better and better, but I hope you will visit my school again.

Answer 1

【答案】1. written—writing

2. not—to

3. were---was

4. had∧been built

5. it---which

6. kind—kinds

7. good—well

8. A---The

9. had—have

10. but—and/ so

【解析】1、考查动词。write是谓语动词与主语I是主动关系，由am推断用writing。故将written改为writing。

2、考查形容词。句意：它不再是三年前过去的样子。no longer“不再”是固定短语。故将not改为no。

3、考查主谓一致。therebe句型中，谓语动词与其后的名词保持人称和数的一致。由only one teaching building可推断，谓语动词用单数。故将were改为was。

4、考查被动语态。主语two new building与谓语动词build是被动关系，用被动语态，现在完成时的被动语态构成形式是：had+been+过去分词。故在had后加been。

5、考查定语从句。“in which there are rooms for music, arts and computer teaching”是定语从句，现行词是a new classroom building，从句中作介词宾语，指物，用关系代词which。故将it改为which。

6、考查名词。differentkindsof“不同种类的”是固定搭配，所以kind应是复数。故将kind改为kinds。

7、考查副词。well修饰谓语is equipped with作状语，作状语用副词。故将good改为well。

8. 考查冠词。句意：学生的数量已经从1500增长到2500。the number of…“……的数量”；a number of…“许多”。根据句意，故将A改为The。

9. 考查动词。句意：并且，我们在学校里和学校周围种植了许多树。根据语境可知，此处讲述过去发生的事情对现在造成的影响和结果，用现在完成时。故将had改为have。

10. 考查连词。句意：我相信我的学校会变得越来越好，我希望你将会在来我们学校参观。前后文是顺承关系。故将but改为and。