Question

Dear Wang Ming,

I received your email yesterday. You asked me what I was doing recently. To tell you the truth, I am learning Chinese by myself. I want to go to Beijing this summer, but I don’t know how to learn it well. Could you give me some advice?

I am looking forward to your early reply.

                                                                   Yours,

                                                                   David

假如你叫王明，请根据David的来信，用英文给他写一封回信，介绍学习中文的方法，提出你的建议。要点如下：

汉语很有用。

尽可能多地记中国字。

训练听力。

用汉语与你周围的人交流。

多读多写很重要。

不要逐字翻译，可根据实际情况适当增加或删减要点。字数控制在100字以内。

Dear David,

     I’m glad to know that you’ll come to Beijing.

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      Looking forward to seeing you in Beijing.

                                                                                    Yours,

                                                                                Wang Ming

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear David,

   I’m glad to know that you’ll come to Beijing.

   As we all know, Chinese is a very useful language and many people in the world are learning it now. If you want to learn it well, you have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It is also important for you to do some reading and writing. I think you can watch TV and listen to the radio to practice your listening. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. If you have any questions, please write to me.

   Looking forward to seeing you in Beijing.

                                                                                      Yours,

                                                                                  Wang Ming

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求用英文写一封回信，向David介绍学习中文的方法，并提出建议。写作要点比较详细，学生容易构思，但不能逐句翻译，要注意句与句、段与段之间的衔接和连贯。注意人称和时态的使用要得当。在写作时，可以适当使用一些定语从句。

【亮点说明】范文使用了很多短语，显得通俗易懂。使用的短语有：As we all know, have to, as many Chinese words as possible, talk with, in Chinese, write to等；使用的重要语法知识有：条件状语从句If you want to learn it well, 固定句型It is also important for you to do, 固定搭配not only...but also, Do your best to do sth等。

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