Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高二（1）班的学生李华。下面四幅图描述了你从图书馆借书及以后发生的事情, 请根据图片的先后顺序, 为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文。词数不少于60。

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Answer 1

【答案】

I borrowed a book from the library the other day and took the book home. One evening, having finished supper, I went back to my room and started to read the book I had borrowed. I was so absorbed that I knocked the coffee cup over by accident, pouring the coffee onto the book. Wet through and coloured brown, the book turned out to be a mess. Of course, I couldn’t return the dirty book and the loss should be covered. The next day, I went to the bookstore, where I finally find the same copies of the book and bought one. When I returned the new book and explained the reason, the librarian accepted the book and praised me for my honesty and responsibility.

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求根据图片上的内容，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文。写作要点必须包含四幅图所显示的内容，不能有遗漏。词数不少于60词；不要出现标点和拼写错误，尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性。

亮点说明：范文涵盖了所有的写作要点，进行了适当的拓展，并注意语句的连贯性；范文还使用了定语从句、非谓语动词等语法知识，使句式变得多样，具备较强的语言运用能力。

语法方面：非谓语动词having finished supper和pouring the coffee onto the book与Wet through and coloured brown；定语从句I had borrowed和where I finally find the same copies of the book；结果状语从句so absorbed that I knocked the coffee cup over by accident等，语法知识运用娴熟，显示了较强的语法功底，也使作文句式变得多样；

篇章结构方面：范文注意使用and, one evening, of course, the next day等来衔接句子和段落，使表达变得更有条理；

短语和搭配方面：范文使用了the other day, go back to, by accident, turn out to be, praise sb for sth等短语和搭配，使作文的内容变得充实。