Question

【题目】最近，我校就同学们的习惯养成问题展开了讨论。请你根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇题为 A good habit, a successful life 的短文，发表在学校的网站上。

注意：

1.对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译；

2.词数 120 左右。开头已写好，不计入总词数；

3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名，人名等；

4.参考词汇：自习 independent study。

A good habit, a successful life

A habit is something that you do often or regularly almost without thinking, especially something that is hard to stop doing.

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Answer 1

【答案】A good habit, a successful life

A habit is something that you do often or regularly almost without thinking, especially something that is hard to stop doing.

Developing good habits of learning is necessary for us. First of all, we should concentrate our attention in class, which will help us better understand what teachers say. Also, we are supposed to make the best of the time for independent study, which can improve our ability to learn by ourselves. Finally, we are encouraged to finish homework alone.

At the same time, good habits of living are also good for our life. Healthy eating along with regular exercise is probably the only way to become fit. What is more, a good amount of sleep every night is also important for our health, for it makes us feel energetic and well prepared for the day to come.

Good habits have a positive effect on our life. Once a good habit is formed, it will give us power to control ourselves and get rid of bad habits. If we insist on behaving ourselves properly, we are sure to live a successful life.

【解析】

本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封电子邮件。

第1步：根据提示可知，本文是一篇讨论后的英语短文：最近，我校就同学们的习惯养成问题展开了讨论。请你根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇题为 A good habit, a successful life 的短文，发表在学校的网站上。良好的学习习惯：1.上课注意力集中；2.充分利用自习时间；3.独立完成作业。良好的生活习惯：1.健康饮食；2.正常锻炼；3.充足睡眠。养成良好习惯的好处：（考生结合自身感受补充两点）。

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：Developing good habits of learning（养成好的学习习惯）；concentrate our attention in class（上课注意力集中）；make the best of the time（充分利用时间）；a good amount of sleep every night（每晚大量的睡眠）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。