Question

一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传，请你用英语为其写一篇文字介绍。主要内容就包括：地点：1距白山入口处500米；

      2房间及价格：单人间（共20间）；

                                                        100元／天；双人间（共15间）；

                                                        150元／天；热水淋浴；

3餐饮：餐厅（中、西餐），咖啡厅（茶、咖啡）；

4游泳池：全天免费开放；

5欢迎预定。

注意：

1词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；

2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel

Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel

Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.

Our hotel stands 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishan Mountain. It has 20 single rooms and 15 double rooms, all with hot showers. A single room is 100 yuan and a double room 150 yuan for one night. You are advised to book in advance. The hotel serves three meals a day and there are Chinese food and western food for you to choose from. You can also enjoy yourself at the cafe drinking tea or coffee in the evening. We also have a swimming pool, which is open all day and free of charge.

All are welcome!

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求写一篇文章来向外国游客介绍新开业的宾馆，题目给出了5个要点，不要逐条翻译，注意语意的连贯。写作时，侧重讲宾馆的地理位置、价格、配套设施等，可以适当增加细节。尽量使用第一人称，使用高级词汇和重点语法知识。

【亮点说明】范文使用了短语away from, in advance, choose from, enjoy yourself, free of charge等，使文章显得简洁凝练而又充实。范文使用also使列举更有条理性；范文使用了语法中的非谓语动词drinking tea or coffee作伴随状语；使用了定语从句which is open all day和被动语态are advised to。语法知识运用熟练，给文章增色很多。

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