Question

18．假定你是李华．你们班的外教Smith先生即将回国．你将代表全班在欢送会上发言．请你用英文发言稿，内容包括：
1．赞扬Smith 的人品和工作．
2．感谢他在学习和生活中给予的帮助．
3．表达对Smith的祝福．
注意：1．词数100左右．发言稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数．
2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯．
Dear Mr．Smith，
It's hard to say"goodbye"．Words cannot convey our endless love and thanks to you，for you've done so much for us in these years．
（高级句型一）You are so humorous and easy-going that everyone wants to be your friends．（赞扬Smith的人品和工作）We do appreciate the way of your teaching．It seems that you have magic to make your lectures lively and interesting．With your guidance，all of us have made great progress．You care about not only our study but also our life．（高分句型二）Whenever we're in trouble，you're always the first man we can depend on．（高分句型三）After class you often join us in games，during which we've shared much happiness．
（表达对史密斯的祝福）Thank you again for everything you've done for us．Wish you a safe journey home and a happy life in the future．
Yours
Li Hua
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Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇发言稿，采用三段式，内容齐全，结构合理．
（高级句型一）You are so humorous and easy-going that everyone wants to be your friends．
该句使用了so…that如此…以至于…引导的结果状语从句；
（高分句型二）Whenever we're in trouble，you're always the first man we can depend on．
whenever引导时间状语从句，无论什么时候；
（高分句型三）After class you often join us in games，during which we've shared much happiness．
该句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，在which之前加介词during，表示在…之后；
高级词汇：humorous and easy-going 幽默，随和；appreciate欣赏；not only…but also…不仅…而且；

解答 Dear Mr．Smith，
     It's hard to say"goodbye"．Words cannot convey our endless love and thanks to you，for you've done so much for us in these years．
（高级句型一）You are so humorous and easy-going that everyone wants to be your friends．（赞扬Smith的人品和工作）We do appreciate the way of your teaching．It seems that you have magic to make your lectures lively and interesting．With your guidance，all of us have made great progress．You care about not only our study but also our life．（高分句型二）Whenever we're in trouble，you're always the first man we can depend on．（高分句型三）After class you often join us in games，during which we've shared much happiness．
    （表达对史密斯的祝福）Thank you again for everything you've done for us．Wish you a safe journey home and a happy life in the future．
                                                                                                                                                                                     Yours
                                                                                                                                                                                     Li Hua

点评 该书面表达为提纲类，该类作文规定了考生的写作思路，写作时应注意紧密联系所给提示，用准确的语言，简洁明了的将文章表达清楚．