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　　假如学校开设的“英语角”本周五下午活动，由你组织你班的活动，请你起草一份通知，向全班同学宣读.

通知内容要点如下：

(1) 前段时间，大部分同学积极参加英语角活动，听力和口语水平提高很快；

(2) 本周星期五下午4：00--6：00在操场北边的花坛周围活动；

(3) 参加人员：所有的学生都可以参加.本校的英语老师，包括你校的姊妹学校--来自美国俄亥俄州代顿中学(Dayton Middle School of Ohio)的25名学生.

(4) 请准时参加，是与姊妹学校的学生交流、交友的好机会.

注意：

(1) 不要逐条翻译，力争要点清晰，句子流畅.

(2) 词数：100左右.

(3) 生词：姊妹学校companion school．

Answer 1

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解析：

写作思路点拨： (1) 人称：第一人称，第三人称 (2) 时态：一般现在时，现在完成时，一般将来时 (3) 短语：English Corner英语角；flower bed花坛；to the north of在……的北边；most of us我们中大多数人；take part in参加；in the past前段时间；achieve progress取得进步；listening English听力英语；speaking English口语英语；join in参加；what's more更重要的是；companion school姊妹学校；Dayton Middle School of Ohio美国俄亥俄州代顿中学；make friends with与……交朋友 (4) 要点 1)前段时间，大部分同学积极参加英语角活动．听力和口语水平提高很快 2)本周星期五下午4：00--6：00在操场北边的花坛周围活动 3)参加人员：所有的学生都可以参加，本校的英语老师及你校的姊妹学校， 来自美国俄亥俄州代顿中学的25名学生 4)这是与姊妹学校的学生交流、交友的好机会，请准时参加. (5) 草拟要点成英语 1) most of the students to have taken an active part in the activity of“the English Corner”, to have achieved progress in listening and speaking English 2) to hold “the English Corner” between 4:00 and 6:00 p.m. this afternoon around the flower bed to the north of the playground 3) all the English teachers to join in the activity, 25 students from the companion school--Dayton Middle School of Ohio U.S.A. to join in “the English Corner” 4) to be a good chance for the students to communicate and make friends with them, not to miss it (6) 扩展要点成句 1) Most of the students took an active part in the activity of “the English Comer”. Much progress in listening and speaking English has been achieved. 2) This afternoon “the English Corner” will be held between 4:00 and 6:00 p.m. around the flower bed to the north of the playground. 3) All the English teachers of the school will join in the activity, 25 students from the companion school--Dayton Middle School of Ohio U.S.A. will join in “the English Corner”. 4) This is a good chance for the students to communicate and make friends with them. Don't miss it. (7) 合理调整人称，适当调整句型，增加必要句型，扩展要点成句 May I have your attention, please? I have something important to tell you. This afternoon “the English Corner” will be held between 4:00 and 6:00 p.m. around the flower bed to the north of the playground. Most of us took an active part in the activity in the past. And much progress in our listening and speaking English has been achieved. In the afternoon all the English teachers of our school will join us in the activity. What's more, 25 students from our companion school--Dayton Middle School of Ohio U.S.A. will join us in “the English Corner”. This is really a good chance for us to communicate and make friends with them. Don't miss it. (8) 语言运用提示 这是一篇口头通知，要用第一人称口吻来写，通知开头可用May I have your attention，please?来写，以便引起通知对象的注意；表示将要发生的被动动作用将来完成时的被动语态；表示现在完成的被动动作用现在完成时的被动语态.