Question

12．假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，为校刊"英语园地"写一篇短文，记述你教母亲使用微信的情况．
注意：1．词数不少于60．
     2．短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：微信Weixin/WeChat


With the rapid development of the mobile service，With the rapid development of the mobile service，more and more people are using WeChat in their daily life．Seeing her friend and neighors have circles of friends and chat anywhere and anytiem，my mother bought a new cell phone and wanted to do that as others．But she had no idea how to do that．Noticing that，I showed her how to do it．When I was not at home，she still got confused．（高分句型一） So I drew some pictures about the mobile，even each step for her．Day by day，she could operate it very smoothly．On watching her bright face when she chatted on WeChat or showed it to her neighbors，I felt satified because I could finally to something for my mother．（高分句型二）．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
When I was not at home，she still got confused．
高分句型二：
 On watching her bright face when she chatted on WeChat or showed it to her neighbors，I felt satified because I could finally to something for my mother．
句型一 When I was not at home，该句是一个由when引导的时间状语从句，意为  当…时候
句型二 ①On watching her bright..该部分使用了介词on的特殊用法，on位于句首，后接doing  即：on doing sth
意为：一…就…②because I could finally to something for my mother．该句是一个because引导的原因状语从句
此外，还使用了以下高级词汇和短语：
with the development of  随着…的发展

解答 With the rapid development of the mobile service，more and more people are using WeChat in their daily life．Seeing her friend and neighors have circles of friends and chat anywhere and anytiem，my mother bought a new cell phone and wanted to do that as others．But she had no idea how to do that．Noticing that，I showed her how to do it．When I was not at home，she still got confused．（高分句型一） So I drew some pictures about the mobile，even each step for her．Day by day，she could operate it very smoothly．On watching her bright face when she chatted on WeChat or showed it to her neighbors，I felt satified because I could finally to something for my mother．（高分句型二）

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