Question

【题目】随着车的数量的增加，道路安全问题变得越来越严重。假设你是李华，是校学生会主席，请你根据以下写作要点，给校报的英语专栏写一篇英语稿件。

1、列举街道上常见的交通违规现象；

2、分析违反交通规则造成的后果；

3、发出几点倡议（至少两点）

参考词汇：车行道 roadway

Dear fellow students,

I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student’ Union. I’d like to call your attention to the importance of obeying the traffic rules.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear fellow students,

I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student’ Union. I’d like to call your attention to the importance of obeying the traffic rules.

Nowadays, with the number of vehicles increasing on the road, traffic problems have become part of our life. Some people run the red light at the crossing and others ride their bikes on the roadway. Some drivers drive too fast in the street. All the behavior presents potential danger. If we don’t obey the traffic rules, there might be more traffic jams and accidents.

To keep the traffic smooth, I suggest all the students should obey the traffic rules when walking in the street to make sure we are safe and avoid trouble. Also, I think it necessary to lay stress on the traffic safety education.

Let’s take responsibility for ourselves and others. Let’s take action now.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇提纲作文，要点已给出。成文时要注意：1.文章主要用第一人称。2.时态：一般现在时为主。3.文章的内容要点要齐全：（1）列举街道上常见的交通违规现象；（2）分析违反交通规则造成的后果；（3）发出几点倡议（至少两点）。4.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，以提高文章的档次；5.注意使用一些连接词，使得文章表达自然、流畅。

亮点说明：本文是一篇英文稿件，分四段，内容齐全，结构严谨，布局合理，运用高级句子。with the number of vehicles increasing on the road, traffic problems have become part of our life. with的复合结构用在句中；If we don’t obey the traffic rules, there might be more traffic jams and accidents. If引导条件状语从句；To keep the traffic smooth, I suggest all the students should obey the traffic rules when walking in the street to make sure we are safe and avoid trou ble.动词不定式作目的状语，同时句中使用when+doing作时间状语；I think it necessary to lay stress on the traffic safety education.动词不定式作真正宾语；Let’s take responsibility for ourselves and others. Let’s take action now.文章最后用两个祈使句，恰如其分。