Question

5．母亲节快到了．请你用英语写一篇介绍你母亲的简短文章．
【写作内容】

□教龄近20年的小学音乐教师； □二十二岁大学毕业选择当了老师； □工作努力，待学生态度和蔼，以身作则； □深受学生尊敬爱戴； □乐于帮助有困难的学生； □我为母亲自豪．

【写作要求】
只能用 5 个句子表达全部内容．
【评分标准】
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯．

Answer 1

分析 本文写作目的：介绍母亲．
写作内容：□教龄近20年的小学音乐教师；
□二十二岁大学毕业选择当了老师；
□工作努力，待学生态度和蔼，以身作则；
□深受学生尊敬爱戴；
□乐于帮助有困难的学生；
□我为母亲自豪．

解答 My mother has been a music teacher in a primary school for nearly 20 years．She finished college at the age of 22 and chose to work as a teacher．She is well respected and deeply loved by her students because she is very kind to her students，works very hard and is very strict with herself in her work．Whenever her students come across any kind of difficulty，she is always ready to help them．As her daughter，I'm proud of my mother and hope to become a teacher like her in the future．

点评 考生需了解写作要点及写作意图，仔细构思写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．