Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Chris将于10月来中国旅游，请你用英语给他写封建议信。内容包括：

1.写信的目的；

2.来中国前做些准备，如看一些有关中国文化的书，学会使用筷子……

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Chris,

How is everything with you?I'm glad to know you will come to China this October.

I'm writing to suggest what preparations you have to make.First,it would be nice to read some books on Chinese cultures.Second,it couldn't be better if you learn to use chopsticks,which makes you feel at ease when enjoying Chinese cuisines.By the way,if you practice some everyday greeting expressions,you'll feel more comfortable during your stay in China.

Hope my humble proposals could be helpful.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。文章要求给10月来中国旅游的英国朋友Chris写一封建议信。信中要表明写这封信的目的以及Chris应该的做一些准备。文章比较简单，应该以祈使句或者将来时态为止。

【亮点分析】

该范文要点齐全。既介绍了写信的目的，又介绍了Chris应做的一些准备。行文条理清楚，利用first, second, by the way等使文章脉络清晰。作者适当运用了名词性从句（what preparations you have to make），定语从句（which makes you feel at ease when enjoying Chinese cuisines）等高级句型。长短句结合，流畅自然。