Question

请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am good at designing and making women’s clothes. In my childhood, I spent a lot of time on my grandmother’s home. She used to being a dressmaker, and at that time I was greatly impressed by her job. They seemed magical when a piece of clothes turned into a beautiful dress, skirt, or blouse. So in my adolescence, I begin to learn how to design women’s clothing from an extremely creative teacher. For me, designing women’s clothing is very interesting and exciting. I like the process of creation very well because I feel even if I were an artist. My the first model is my mother, she always gets a lot of praise when wearing the clothes I have made. In a word, she is very proud for me.

Answer 1

【小题1】on 改成at
【小题2】being改为be
【小题3】They改为It
【小题4】clothes改为cloth
【小题5】begin改成began
【小题6】well改为much
【小题7】even if改为as if
【小题8】去掉first前面的the
【小题9】在she always前面加上and
【小题10】for改为of

解析试题分析：文章介绍作者对服装设计的兴趣是源自童年奶奶的影响，后来在老师的帮助下学习服装设计，穿着她的衣服，作者的妈妈经常收到表扬，也很以作者为荣。
【小题1】在我的童年我在奶奶家度过了很多时间。在奶奶的家，用介词at，on 改成at
【小题2】她过去是裁缝。Uesed to do过去常常做…，being改为be
【小题3】当一块布变成美丽的衣服，这似乎很神奇。(it指代这项工作)，They改为It
【小题4】clothes是衣服，这里是表示“布”，a piece of cloth：一块布料
【小题5】在我年轻时代，我就和一个很有创造力的老师那里学习设计女士的衣服。因为是作者年轻的时候，用一般过去式：begin改成began
【小题6】我非常喜欢这个创造的过程。well改为much (表示非常之意)
【小题7】因为我感觉我好像是个艺术家。even if即使，改为：as if(似乎，好像)
【小题8】我的第一个模特是我妈妈。First前面有my修饰了，去掉the
【小题9】在she always前面加上and，因为这两句话之间是逗号，应该加并列连词
【小题10】总之，她以我为荣。is proud of me   (以我为傲)
考点：考查短文改错