Question

【题目】假定你是髙二你（1）班学生李华，最近发现校园中有随意涂写（scribble)和乱丢垃圾（litter）的行为，请用英文给校长写封信。

1、说明写信的目的；

2、对这些行为提出批评；

3、提出建议。

注意：1、词数100左右；

2、可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；

3、邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mr. Headmaster,

I am Li Hua, a student from Class One, Senior II.

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Headmaster,

I am Li Hua, a student from Class One, Senior II. I am writing to draw your attention to some improper behavior among us students: littering and scribbling. It makes our school dirty and unpleasant, and does harm to the image of our school.

I always feel ashamed whenever I see this. It is clearly not appropriate for a student to litter and scribble about. I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behavior. At the same time, students should be encouraged to developed good habits and better behave themselves.

I believe that, with the joint efforts of both teachers and students, our school will become a more enjoyable place in the near future. Thanks for your consideration.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文属于提纲类作文，要求假定你是髙二你（1）班学生李华，最近发现校园中有随意涂写（scribble)和乱丢垃圾（litter）的行为，请用英文给校长写封信。注意书信的格式和用语。考虑用一般现在时来写。要点：1、说明写信的目的；2、对这些行为提出批评；

3、提出建议。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: set up建立，At the same time同时。还使用了宾语从句I wonder if the school could place more dustbins around and set up specific rules against such behavior.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。