Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Mike来信说中国书法很难学。就此请你用英语给他写一封回信， 主要内容包括：

1.学习书法的意义；

2.学习书法的技巧；

3．给他鼓励和信心。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：书法calligraphy;毛笔writing brush

Dear Mike,

I’m sorry to know that you have difficulty in learning Chinese calligraphy.

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Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mike,

I’m sorry lo know that you have difficulty in learning Chinese calligraphy. In fact you are not alone. Many people, including some of my classmates, feel it hard to write with a writing brush.

However, it is very important to learn the artistic handwriting of characters. Learning Chinese calligraphy is very helpful in learning more about Chinese culture and history. Besides, written Chinese is well-known for its beauty.

If you want to be a good user of the writing brush, first you have to be patient. Second, you have to keep practising since practice makes perfect. Lastly, you should pay attention to the use of calligraphy models. Just be confident and practise hard and you'll be an expert in Chinese calligraphy.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Hua

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