Question

【题目】阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Not all education can and should happen within the classroom. Sometimes, traveling is the best form of education, as students can get a number of personal and educational benefits from travel. From learning about other cultures first-hand to seeing where historical events took place with their own eyes, educational travel gives students the opportunity to deepen their understanding of art, science, history, and culture in many ways.

Educational becomes a whole new experience when students can see lots of tools and equipment for themselves by traveling to different places. The tools and equipment could be used by scientists decades or even centuries ago to make discoveries that make our modern world possible. Educational travel brings the materials off the pages and into reality, allowing students to connect themselves with them in a more meaningful way.

No matter where students go, it’s almost guaranteed that they’ll find some kind of food that is unique to that place or done better than anywhere else. If someone gets Chicago-style pizza in Chicago, they’re going to have a different tasting experience than they would if they were getting the same type of thing in, say, Texas. At the same time, getting chili in Texas would be a whole different experience from getting chili in New York or Chicago. Students can learn a lot about a culture by what they eat on a daily basis and what they consider a special meal, so it’s good to take a taste of the local food and learn through all of the senses.

Being away from family, home, and familiar ground is a courageous and independent adventure in its own right. Educational travel provides that opportunity to allow students to open their minds regarding how they choose to live life, which can be extraordinarily helpful in preparing students for college and adulthood. Traveling – with the combined social skills and perspectives(视角) it teaches – really allows students to better understand how they can operate on their own.

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Answer 1

【答案】Educational travel can provide students with a number of benefits.(要点1)First, educational travel makes the materials on the book real, which helps students deepen their learning.(要点2)Second, students can taste various foods in their educational travel, thus helping them know about different cultures.(要点3)Third, educational travel encourages students to be more independent and braver, which does good to their future.(要点4)(60 words)

【解析】

本篇考查的作文类型是概要写作。

文章的主要结构为总-分-总。主要讲教育旅游可以为学生提供许多好处，并具体说明了这些好处是什么。符合概要写作常规出题思路。

第一段讲述教育旅游可以为学生提供许多好处。可以用到的词汇或句型有：provide sb. with sth., a number of, benefits等。第二段讲述教育旅行使书本上的材料真实，帮助学生加深他们的学习。可以用到的词汇或句式有：materials, deepen, help sb. do sth.等。第三段主要讲学生可以在他们的教育旅行中品尝各种食物，从而帮助他们了解不同的文化。可以用到的词汇或句式有：taste, various, know about, different cultures等。第四段讲了教育旅游鼓励学生更加独立和勇敢，这对他们的未来有好处。可以用到的词汇或句式有：encourage sb. to do sth., independent, do good to 等。

【高分句型一】

First, educational travel makes the materials on the book real because educational travel helps students deepen their learning. 首先，教育性旅行使书中的材料变得真实，因为教育性旅行帮助学生加深了他们的学习。运用because引导原因状语从句。

【高分句型二】

Second, students can taste various foods in their educational travel so that educational travel can help them know about different cultures. 第二，学生可以在他们的教育旅游中品尝各种食物，这样教育旅游可以帮助他们了解不同的文化。运用so that引导目的状语从句。