Question

3．请根据如图写一篇100-120个词的短文．你的短文应包括下列要点：
1．简要描写图画内容；
2．说明图画含义；
3．表达你的观点．
注意：
短文开头已给出（不计词数）；
As is shown in the picture above，                              ．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的图片信息，写一篇英语短文，写作时人称以第一人称和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．写作要点：1．简要描写图画内容；2．说明图画含义；3．表达你的观点．
重要短语：deal with（处理，涉及）；make a living （谋生）；era（时代）；be supposed to（应该）；work hard（努力学习/工作）；
                let alone （更不必说，听任）；lead to （导致）；take sth seriously（认真对待某事）；solve（解决）．
高分句型：1．However，he doesn't seem so confident so for as creativity is concerned，which is very common among us Chinese student．
                 这里关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句，which指代前面he doesn't seem so confident so for as creativity is concerned这件事．
                 2．it's difficult to make a living without knowledge，let alone contributions to society．
                 在这个句子中，it是形式主语，真正的主语是不定式短语 to make a living without knowledge．
                 3．However，if we try to learn knowledge at the cost of losing creativity，it may lead to serious consequences for our nation．
                  这是一个if引导条件状语从句的复合句．

解答 As is shown in the picture above，the graduate，after years of hard work and tough training，displays superb abilities in dealing with exams of all kinds．However，he doesn't seem so confident so for as creativity is concerned，which is very common among us Chinese students（高分句型一）．
    Admittedly，in today's era of knowledge economy，it's difficult to make a living  without knowledge，let alone contributions to society（高分句型二）．So we are supposed to work hard to lay a solid foundation for the future．However，if we try to learn knowledge at the cost of losing creativity，it may lead to serious consequences for our nation（高分句型三）．
      I think we must take the problem seriously and efforts must be made to solve it．We hope Chinese students will not only do well in the exams but also excel in creativity（个人观点和期望）．

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．