Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误仅限1词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Li Lin is a senior three students who devotes himself to his lessons every day．Last Saturday, as usual, he went to several courses．In the evening, he studies at home until deep into the night．He was too sleepy and tired that he couldn't work effectively．In Sunday morning, Li Lin was about to study when his father came up and advised him to have a break．Soon they had good idea．They bought a kite which they liked it very much and then the family went to the suburbs where Li Lin enjoyed himself fly the kite．The family had a picnic together but felt very relaxed in the open air．On Monday, Li Lin was energetic and actively in class．He said it was only why he had a better weekend.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】students改为student

【2】studies改为studied

【3】too改为so

【4】In改为On

【5】good idea前加a

【6】liked it中的it去掉

【7】fly改为flying

【8】but改为and

【9】actively改为active

【10】why改为because

【解析】

试题分析：李林是一名高三学生，他课上精力充沛，积极活跃，这完全得益于他有一个更好的周末。

【1】students改为student 句意： 一名高三学生，所以是单数。故把students改为student。

【2】studies改为studied 句意：说的是上周的事，所以是过去时态。故把studies改为studied。

【3】too改为so 固定句式so…that…如此…以至于…．；too不能用于这样的结构。故把too改为so。

【4】In改为On 具体到某一天的早晨使用介词on。故把In改为On。

【5】good idea前加a idea为可数名词，故在good idea前加a。

【6】liked it中的it去掉 定语从句的关系代词which已经做了liked的宾语，所以it多余。故把liked it中的it去掉。

【7】fly改为flying 固定结构：enjoy (oneself) doing sth.故把 fly改为flying。

【8】but改为and 根据句意，不表转折，而是顺承。 故把but改为and。

【9】actively改为active 跟energetic并列做表语，用形容词，故把actively改为active。

【10】why改为because 根据语境含义，“这是因为……”，故把why改为because。

【知识拓展】

1.This is why 主语+谓语---，这就是为什么---。

2.That is because主语+谓语---，那是因为---。

3.The reason is that主语+谓语---，理由是----。