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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

In my opinion, my father can always give me advices because he has experienced a lot. When he graduated in college, his first job was to work as an office clerk. Later he found life was boring to sit in office, so he decided to quit and then starts his travels to many places. Having been traveled a lot, my father broadened his vision great and then went back home. While he met my mother, she thought it was time to settle down. Interesting in his life experience, I can’t help thinking that if I go with him, I will meet many new persons with who I can make friends. I want to live like my father.

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【答案】

【解析】1.advice是不可数名词，故把advices---advice。

2.固定搭配：graduate from 从---毕业，故在把in---from。

3.习惯用法：in the office在办公室里。故在in/后面加the。

4.句意：所以他决定放弃，决定去很多地方旅游。根据句意可知用一般过去时态，故把start---started。

5.句意：旅游了很多地方，所以我父亲大大开拓了视野。此处表主动关系，故用现在分词完成式做原因状语，所以把been去掉。

6. 句意：旅游了很多地方，所以我父亲大大开拓了视野。副词修饰动词，故把great---greatly。

7.句意：当他遇见我妈妈的时候，他认为是该安家的时候了。根据句意可知此处是when/as引导的时间状语从句，故把While---When/As。

8. 句意：当他遇见我妈妈的时候，他认为是该安家的时候了。可知把she---he。

9.句意：我对父亲的人生经历感兴趣，我忍不住想是否和他在一起。此处是过去分词做原因状语，故把Interesting--- Interested。

10.介词后面指人用whom/指物用which引导定语从句。故把who---whom。