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8.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线(-),并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.

As the college entrance examination is approaching,it won't take long after I graduate.Now,I have much to share with my fellow student.
Firstly,I'd like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way,teachers,parents and friends including.Without their help and advice,my life will be different.Secondly,it's high time for I to say sorry to the classmates who I hurt or misunderstand.I firm believe that communication and smiles act bridges to friendship.Thirdly,I've made up my mind to make every effort to study,as hard work is the key to a success.Finally I want to express my hope which all the younger fellows can make full use of time,because time and tide wait for no man.

分析 这是一篇毕业感言.高考快到了,我想和同学们分享一下我的感受.首先要感谢支持我的人;其次我对曾经伤害或误解过的人表示歉意;还有我决定努力学习,因为努力是成功的关键.

解答 As the college entrance examination is approaching,it won't take long after I graduate.Now,I have much to share with my fellow student
Firstly,I'd like to show my appreciation to those standing by me all the way,teachers,parents and friends including.Without their help and advice,my life will be different.Secondly,it's high time for I to say sorry to the classmates who I hurt or misunderstand.I firm believe that communication and smiles act∧bridges to friendship.Thirdly,I've made up my mind to make every effort to study,as hard work is the key to success.Finally I want to express my hope which all the younger fellows can make full use of time,because time and tide wait for no man.
详解:
1.after改为before;句型搭配错误.it won't take long before+从句,不久以后就…
2.student改为students;名词错误.句意表达的是复数,我的同学们.
3.including改为included;分词错误.include和名词parents and friends构成被动关系,要用过去分词;用现在分词including时,名词要放在后面.
4.will改为would;情态动词错误.句意表达的是虚拟,句中要用情态动词would/should/might/could等.
5.I改为me;代词错误.句中I作介词for的宾语,要用宾格.
6.misunderstand改为misunderstood;时态错误.句意表达的是过去,要用一般过去时态.
7.firm改为firmly;副词错误.句中firm修饰动词believe,要用副词.
8.加as;动词搭配错误.act as扮演,起…作用.
9.a去掉;冠词错误.句中success是抽象名词,不用冠词.
10.which改为that;连词错误.句中all the younger fellows can make full use of time,because time and tide wait for no man解释hope的内容,是一个同位语从句,要用that来连接.

点评 短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识.常考的知识点有:名词(单复数错误),动词(时态,语态,搭配,转换),代词(指代错误),形容词和副词(转换,比较等级),连词(and,but,or)等.偶尔也会考查逻辑错误,如本来用her,却用了his等等.解题是要注意:以句子为单位,以动词为中心.看句子要看完整,避免句子前后矛盾的错误;找错误要以动词为主,动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分.

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