Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I like music very much, pop songs particularly. Every evening then I am doing homework and at weekends when I at home, I always play some of my favorite songs on my tape recorder. The familiar patterns of notes attracts me into the colourfully world of music. Now and then I stopped to follow the songs. Sometimes, my mother comes in, asking me to fix my attention to my homework. She does not like the pop music. Like most grown-ups, she enjoys folk songs, because the peaceful music reminds her of their beautiful life when she was young. It is a truth which people of different age understand music differently and enjoy different kinds of music.

Answer 1

【小题1】then 改when
【小题2】I后面加am
【小题3】attracts改attract
【小题4】colourfully改colourful或colorful
【小题5】stopped改 stop
【小题6】to 改on
【小题7】去the
【小题8】their 改her
【小题9】which改that
【小题10】age 改ages

解析试题分析：文章介绍自己喜欢音乐，特别是流行音乐，而他妈妈喜欢民歌，所以说不同年龄的人喜欢不同的音乐。
【小题1】when引导的是定语从句，修饰evening，句意：每晚我做作业的时候。
【小题2】at home是介词短语，不能直接做谓语，要和be连用
【小题3】主语是The familiar patterns of notes 是复数，谓语也是复数：attracts改attract
【小题4】修饰world of music 应该用形容词colourful或colorful
【小题5】时间是Now and then句子用一般现在时： stopped改 stop
【小题6】fix my attention后面搭配介词on，表示“专注于”
【小题7】pop music.是不可数的，这里泛指“流行音乐”，去the
【小题8】句意：美妙的音乐使她想起年轻时的美好生活： their 改her
【小题9】这是同位语从句，同位词是truth，that引导的同位语说明事实的内容。which改that
【小题10】people of different ages是不同年龄的人。Age是可数名词，与different连用用复数。
考点：考查短文改错