Question

【题目】假设你是新华中学高一年级的李华，你的英国网友Tom来信邀请你暑假到伦敦观光旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件。

1.表示歉意；

2.解释原因；

3.另约时间。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.不要逐条翻译，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词。

Dear Tom,

Thank you for inviting me to go to sightseeing in London during summer holidays.

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Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

Thank you for inviting me to go sightseeing in London during summer holidays.

It is much to my regret that I can not join you,because I will be fully occupied in preparing for New Terms' studies-Senior Two.I must do a lot of homework ,review different subjects and join in different after-class activities. What's more,my grandma is ill,so I must take care of her.I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance.Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting next time? If so,please don't hesitate to drop me a line about your preferable date.I do long for a happy journey with you.

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】
这是一篇提纲类作文。文章内容要点已经给出。考生在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：
1.本篇是一封回信。你的英国网友Tom来信邀请你暑假到伦敦观光旅游，但你因故不能赴约。你要对此表达你的感谢并给出解释

2.要点要齐全，要解释出你不能去的原因，并且另约时间。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。
3.根据要点，先组此句；句式丰富。
4.注意文章要以书信的形式进行叙述，一定要多用句型，否则会显得说服力不够，内容不够丰满。
【范文亮点】
1.文章开头用了 Thank you for ，是回复邀请函的重要格式，后面第二段紧接着解释了这样做的原因，衔接紧密。

2.文章使用了“l take care of”“ join in”等句式短语，使文章内容更加饱满
3. It is much to句式的使用：

“It is much to my regret that I can not join you,because I will be fully occupied in preparing for New Terms' studies-Senior Two.”