Question

【题目】本月初，你们班开展了一次以"Less Stress, Better Life"为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容包括:

●同学们中普遍存在的压力：学习很努力，成绩不理想；作业太多，没时间休息.

●我的压力：成绩好，但与同学相处有困难；与父母缺乏沟通。

●缓解压力的方法：至少两项。 注意： 1. 词数120左右；

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Answer 1

【答案】Less Stress, Better Life

Stress is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much stress. Some students study very hard but they are still poor in their studies. They often worry about their exams. Others think that they have too much homework to do that they have no time to relax themselves.

I’m always under stress, too. I’m good at every subject, but it is hard for me to get on well with my classmates, I can hardly communicate with my parents, either. I really feel tired sometimes.

But how to solve the problem? I think a conversation with parents or teachers is helpful and taking exercise can make us relaxed when we’re under pressure.

【解析】本题考查提纲类作文。首先要认真审题，本月初，你们班开展了一次以"Less Stress, Better Life"为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享。其次要确定时态，表示经常或反复发生的事情，所以这篇文章要使用一般现在时。然后要确定文章的结构，按照提示的内容逐条翻译即可。在写作过程中，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合题目所给出的信息，不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。正确使用写信的格式，词数控制在一百二十左右。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些高级句型。例如Others think that they have too much homework to do that they have no time to relax themselve，这里含有一个宾语从句。I think a conversation with parents or teachers is helpful and taking exercise can make us relaxed when we’re under pressure. 这里含有一个时间状语从句。