Question

【题目】假如你是李华，昨天收到某报社编辑王先生的邮件，得知自己在本报社主办的英语征文大赛中获得了一等奖，他代表报社邀请你参加今年八月份举办的英语夏令营。

请你根据以下要点用英语给王先生写—封邮件：

1.感谢他的邮件通知；

2.接受邀请，期待参加夏令营；

3.咨询夏令营的具体相关信息（如费用、注意事项等)。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mr.Wang,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Wang,

My name is Li Hua. I am writing to thank you for informing me of the encouraging news that I have won the first prize in the English composition organized by your newspaper.

I'm excited to know that I can participate in the English summer camp in August this year. It's a great opportunity for me to join in such an instructive activity. Undoubtedly, I'd like to be a member of the group. Would you please tell me more information about the camp? When will the camp begin? How much will it cost? What do I need to prepare for it?

I'm looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇命题作文。文章内容要点已经给出。同学们在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1.通篇以一般现在时为主。2.要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅。3.注意语气。既然是给报社编辑王先生写信，语气应该比较恳切，真诚，有礼貌。此外要注意书信的格式问题。

【范文亮点】1. I am writing to thank you for informing me of the encouraging news that I have won the first prize in the English composition organized by your newspaper.谨以此信感谢您告知我这一激励人心的消息：我在由贵社组织的英语写作大赛中获得了一等奖（运用了inform sb of sth这一高分句式；运用了that引导的同位语从句，解释news的内容）

2. It's a great opportunity for me to join in such an instructive activity.对我来说，参加这样一个具有教育意义的活动是个绝好的机会。（运用了instructive这一高分词汇；使用了it作形式主语，真正的主语是后面的to do不定式。）