Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划线一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

My new friend Tom is good at English writing. One day. I asked him how he did such well in written English. He told me that he has a habit of keep a diary every day. “You can try them, too. I’m sure you will improve your written English quickly in this way.” He said. I thought Tom was right, but I decided to follow his advices. I started to write down something interested every day. Sometimes when I didn’t know how to spell a word, I would look it up in a dictionary. When I didn’t know how to write a sentence correct, I would ask my teacher for the help. My written English has really improved a lot because that.

Answer 1

【答案】1. such→so 2. has→had 3. keep→keeping 4. them→it 5. but→so/and 6. advices→advice 7. interested→interesting 8. correct→correctly 9. help前的the去掉 10. because后加of

【解析】1. 考查副词。such是形容词，修饰名词作定语；so是副词，修饰形容词、副词或动词作状语，well此处是副词。故such改为so。

2. 考查动词时态。主句用一般过去时，宾语从句遵循主从句时态一致原则，从句也用过去时态。故has改为had。

3. 考查动名词。介词后跟名词、动名词或代词作宾语。故keep改为keeping。

4. 考查代词。根据语境可知，此处指代上文提到的“记日记的习惯”，habit是单数，用代词it。故them改为it。

5. 考查连词。句意：我认为Tom是对的，于是我决定听从他的建议。前后文是并列关系或者因果关系，不是转折关系。故but改为so/and。

6. 考查名词。advice“建议”，是不可数名词。故advices改为advice。

7. 考查形容词。现在分词变化来的形容词表示被修饰语的特征；过去分词变化来的形容词表示被修饰语的感受。这里修饰something，说明事物的特征，故interested改为interesting。

8. 考查副词。修饰动词用副词作状语，修饰动词write用副词correctly。故correct改为correctly。

9. 考查冠词。ask sb. for help表示“向某人寻求帮助”，help是不可数名词，根据语境可知，此处表示泛指。故去掉定冠词the。

10. 考查介词。because是连词，连接句子。because of是介词短语，后跟名词作宾语。此处后面只有代词that，故在because后加of。