Question

【题目】假设你是李华，你的好友Susan前不久随父母去了美国，她写信告诉你她很不适应美国的校园生活，感到很孤独。请你根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件。

1．学好英语，从而增加和别人交流的机会；

2．多交一些朋友，友情会使她忘记孤独；

3．积极参加各种活动，使自己的生活更加有趣。

注意：1. 词数：100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节。

Dear Susan,

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Best Wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Susan,

I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new school life in America, but this situation can be easily changed if you take my advice.

First, you should work hard at English, which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others. Secondly, why not make some friends? They can help you to forget your loneliness. Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you take an active part in all kinds of activities, which will help to make life more interesting. By doing so, you will be happier with your new life soon.

I hope you will find these ideas useful.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：假设你是李华，你的好友Susan前不久随父母去了美国，她写信告诉你她很不适应美国的校园生活，感到很孤独。请你根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件。1．学好英语，从而增加和别人交流的机会；2．多交一些朋友，友情会使她忘记孤独；3．积极参加各种活动，使自己的生活更加有趣。注意：1. 词数：100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节。

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