Question

18．假如你是中学生李华，你校外教Bob近期准备回美国度寒假．你班同学决定举办晚会为他送行．请你根据以下提示，用英语写一封e-mail，告知他相关活动安排．
1．目的：向他表达谢意；
2．时间：本周五晚上6：30开始，预计持续1个小时；
3．地点：学校报告厅；
4．活动：同学们一起唱英文歌，并赠送亲手制作的礼物和卡片等．
注意：
1．词数100左右．
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
3．开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Bob，
With winter vacation drawing near，we know you are going back to America for the holiday．                 
Yours truly，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
 To express our gratitude for you excellent teaching in our school and your love for our class，we've decided to have a farewell party for you
高分句型二：
At the party，you will present you some gift and cards，which are mostly made by ourselves
句型一 To express our gratitude for you excellent…该部分使用了不定式位于句首做目的状语，表明意图
句型二  which are mostly made by ourselves 该句是一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在句中充当主语，替代前面出现的先行词gift and cards

解答 Dear Bob，
   With winter vacation drawing near，we know you are going back to America for the holiday．We'll miss you very much during your absence．
   To express our gratitude for you excellent teaching in our school and your love for our class，we've decided to have a farewell party for you．（高分句型一）（说明写信目的）The party will start at 6：30 on Friday evening in the lecture hall and will probably last about an hour．At the party，you will present you some gift and cards，which are mostly made by ourselves．（高分句型二）
   We wish you a pleasant journey back home!We are also expecting you to come back to us again soon．（给予祝愿）
                                                                                                                                     Yours truly，
                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

点评 该书面表达为提纲类，该类作文一般规定了考生的写作思路，罗列出了相应的写作要点．考生在平时应注意积累相应的词汇和短语，在写作时尽量做到将要点与主题紧密结合，用准确的、简洁明了的语言将作文展示出来．