Question

基础写作（共15分）

李安在第85届奥斯卡中再次获得“最佳导演”，引起热烈讨论。假如你是校报小记者，请根据下文的提示，写一篇关于李安的报道。

[写作内容]

基本信息：李安，1954年生于台湾，国内外著名华人电影导演

经历：

1. 1979年前往美国追求 (pursue) 电影梦，但毕业后找不到工作；

2. 6年后才拍摄 (shoot) 第一部电影《推手》（Pushing Hands），大获成功；

名声渐长，开始尝试不同风格的电影。

成就：近年来多次获得最佳导演奖，被美国杂志评为最伟大的导演之一。

[写作要求]

只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；

2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Li An, who was born in Taiwan in 1954, is a well-known Chinese film director from home and abroad. He went to America to pursue his dream of film in 1979, but unfortunately, Li An remained unemployed after graduation. It was six years later that he shot his first film "Pushing Hands", which was a great success. As he became increasingly famous, he began to direct films of diverse styles. In recent years, having been awarded the Best Director for many times, he was acknowledged as one of the greatest directors by an American magazine. 

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。因为只能使用5个句子表达全部内容，所以尽量用复合句：如：Li An, who was born in Taiwan in 1954, is a well-known Chinese film director from home and abroad.这是定语从句，It was six years later that he shot his first film "Pushing Hands", which was a great success.这里用了强调句和定语从句

考点：提纲类作文

点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。