Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友Jack对近期你在学校参加的社团活动很感兴趣。请写一封邮件做介绍，内容包括：

1. 你参加的社团活动；

2. 介绍活动时间、内容等；

3. 你的收获和感受。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jack,

How’s everything going?

I’m excited to tell you that I’ve joined a Chinese painting club in our school this term. Members of our club meet once a week. We have different activities and I enjoy all of them. We’ve invited some well-known painters to the club to talk about the history of Chinese painting, and to teach us the basic techniques of drawing. At the weekend, we go to visit art galleries, where we study the masterpieces of famous artists and discuss how we understand them. Of course, we practice painting whenever we can spare some time.

I’m so proud of myself that now I understand Chinese painting a lot better, and I’ve learned how to draw. I love painting.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本书面表达是一篇提纲类写作。要求以李华的名义用英语给澳大利亚笔友Jack写一封电子邮件。

这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。